This is a substantially revised version of an unpublished poem that one or two readers of this blog might have seen or have heard at a reading. I’ll leave it here for comment for a few days before removing it.
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Summa
2 responses to “Summa”
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Quite good, I think (although I am not well – virus – so I might be semi-delirious with medicine). Better than what I remember of this poem, so it’s maybe been revised even since I read it?
This bit:
even the cough of dust
shuffling down a blade of sun,that repeated “… of …” structure – I don’t know. How about “shuffling down a sunblade”?
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Thanks, Rob. Yes, it has been revised significantly since you read it.
I’ll leave it up a little longer; maybe until Monday.
Amy Jo Philip 
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